Good, but get rid of that preset!!!111!1eleven!!1one1!!
And all of that piano is raping my ear.
The guitar didn't help either.
Give bad, get bad. My second 0. Ok. I understand it. it never mind. Yes it mind. I think it could get something better. um. Nevermind.
I just think that your songs are just too simple. Thats it.
Well, im interested how many 0 i'll get in future. Looks like very many.
I love the funky beat to the song, and the chopped up vocals at 2:13.
BUT, let's not forget the vocals. you sung that? Wow, I love your voice.
All in all, beautiful song.
Pretty good, pretty short.
This was really good, but
-1 for the beginning
-1 for the short length
Other than that, it was good!
This song was pretty good, but you shouldn't use presets without filtering them.
Looooooong ago (before this account), I used the same preset.
You melody sense it good, just try to make your own sounds.
This song was actually not that bad.
That overuse of "Dance" was kind of stupid,
but the beat and rhythm was catchy and
fun to listen to!
For a start...
Make it louder! I could barely hear it.
Also, although there are lyrics, the melody was way too repetitive, and there just wasn't enough. Keep it up, though.
It was just a test of stuff, felt like posting it.
It's a pretty good song, but I just don't feel that there is enough energy in this to sustain it until the point it ends.
Good, but not great.
Nah, I just made a 2 second long song, and it's not a loop.
Also, make the high-pitched thing less high-pitched.
NO VOICE, NO LOOPS.
No. No loops, and lose the voice in the beginning.
But hey, you're improving!
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